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发表于 2008-10-11 22:32:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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[s:50] 墨朵最爱修改语法错误了.

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       I  wonder if there have the ture love in the world.Many girls had no control over theirselves because they always be deeply affected by the hurt of love.


      Once when i was going back home,a boy who is my classmate stopped me and asked a question carefully,"Susan,would you love me?"


   On seeing him,i tried to keep quiet ,not daring to move,staying still and silent but i was not at all as calm as i appeared.I didn't know how to answer.I thought and thought,then pretend to give a laugh and said,"You are only joking,aren't you ?"


     Then I ran away quickly.My god!I thought,what happened?My heart moved up and down faster and faster.I was afraid  to meet him in the school.I couldn't forget it that i couldn't concentrate on class.


     My teacher asked me,"Susan,what happened to you?"


     My father felt my difference,too.One day he asked me to sit beside him.


    "Susan,are you have any trouble?"


     I saw his gentle smile,said Very Very carefully,"Papa,I'm afraid.A boy told me he had fallen in love with me."


     He smiled again,"My little girl,how wonderful it was!That seems you are a pretty girl.Why not think in this way?"


    "Really?"


     "Yes.There are nothing wrong with the love.But you should know what the true love is.The true love can't be seen,but it can felt in everywhere.When you grow up,you will know it.Don't worry,my little girl."




     I held him cheerfully,said thanks by heart again and again.

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发表于 2008-10-12 02:47:37 | 只看该作者
本来想翻译一下的。。。。查了几下字典。。“咔嚓”!脑袋又坏了,已经连修了一个星期,好不容易比较正常。。。现在又得重启。。。还是蒜了。。。我老了。。。[s:42]

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板凳
发表于 2008-10-12 09:07:03 | 只看该作者

我恰好有兴趣……红色字体是修改过了的。下划线部分应删去,这里没有删除线

I  wonder if there has the ture love in the world. Many girls had no control over theirselves because they always be
deeply affected by the
hurt of love.
   
   Once when I was going back home, a boy who is my classmate stopped me and asked a question carefully, \"Susan, would you love me?\"
   On seeing him,I tried to keep quiet ,not daring to move,staying still and silent but I was not at all as calm as I appeared.I didn\'t know how to answer.I thought and thought,then pretend to give a laugh and said,\"You are only joking,aren\'t you ?\"
     Then I ran away quickly. My god! I thought,
what happened ?My heart moved up and down faster and faster. I was afraid  to meet him in the school. I couldn\'t forget it that
I couldn\'t concentrate on class.
     My teacher asked me,\"Susan,what happened to you?\"
     My father felt my different, too. One day he asked me to sit beside him.
    \"Susan, have you met any trouble?\"
     I saw his gentle smile, said Very very carefully, \"Papa, I\'m afraid. A boy told me he had fallen in love with me.\"
    He smiled again, \"My little girl, how wonderful it was! That seems you are a pretty girl. Why not think in this way?\"
    \"Really?\"
     \"Yes. There are nothing wrong with the love. But you should know what the true love is. The true love can\'t be seen, but it can felt in everywhere. When you grow up, you will know it. Don\'t worry, my little girl.\"
     I held him cheerfully, said thanks by heart again and again.

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-12 10:10:19 | 只看该作者
[s:55] 谢谢碗老大..
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发表于 2008-10-12 12:00:03 | 只看该作者
呵呵...wonderful...
  语法...弱项...
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发表于 2008-10-12 12:13:12 | 只看该作者
无非就是说一个愣头青向一个女同学示爱,女同学听了后觉的八两八两的,后来一个自以为开明的父亲向她解释了诸如爱是无对错没啥大不了的小故事.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-12 12:38:43 | 只看该作者
原帖由 猪壮壮 于 2008-10-12 12:13 发表
无非就是说一个愣头青向一个女同学示爱,女同学听了后觉的八两八两的,后来一个自以为开明的父亲向她解释了诸如爱是无对错没啥大不了的小故事.


[s:59] 没错啊...
写这些最简单了..

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